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Old 08-16-04, 12:50 AM   #18
Triple_N
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Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..



Ingenious mind......your flow was tight throughout verse, structure was good, imagery was nice, it was well written story, I liked the emotion of it as well, good overall drop I give ya.....8/10

LXD......also good story, good flow, structure coulda been a little better but your imagery wasn't as good as ingenious's, and the emotion of yours wasn't as strong but good drop just not enuff for win...giva ya....7/10
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