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Old 08-16-04, 01:43 AM   #3
Logic The Goonie
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Voted For: saaran

hahaha he said ur already extinct! lol. but for real, on sided battle for real but tha6 doesnt mean saaran doesnt need some help in some areas. saaran u gotta work on that wordplay a lil bit, yeah some of the punches were funny but your rap was repetitive as fuck. also u gotta do more personal shit than that or else ppl is gunna think its prewritten. boom,just focus on your structure (try writing in lines like saaran) and your punches and im sure everything else will follow along and u can get some respect sround here. but for now..............."boom ur already extinct" fuckin hilarious....

v/saaran (no hate)
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