Voted For: Demon Pyrokronix

Yo Demon Pyrokronix Took this wit Better Punches, Structure, Flow, and a OVerall Better Verse, You could Work On yah Vocab a little Bit, and work wit some Wordplay, also yah punches were there, but not Very Strong..Keep Elevating..!!

Illusion, yo man you gotta work on yah structure, ALOT.. And Flow, Structure, and a Complete New Style, B/c No hate, but it was wacked.. Try Reading Other Battles,, And see how they Work there verse.. Punches, wordplay, and such... Not hate.. Peace

Retrun the Fav on a battle in my sig.. !!!!!!!

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