nice verse shadow, good vocab, flow, structure could be better but blah . . nice verse. diesel, wasn't likin your verse, sorry man, "ya couldnt elevate if i pointed u to an escalator
man ya as weak as the fuckin 1st terminator" i liked that line, but apart from that, i felt your verse was full of basic rhymes such as "skill n will" n "battle n rattle", try and up your vocab man. no beef