........ ite ya got a faggot accent, but u made it work for you in this song.... decent... u went well to the beat u had and the story u told, u need to work on ya chorus and put some deeper bass in it and i'd really be able to get into the story, but also u kinda ended abruptly and with the word rug, not very cool. same wit ya chorus u had some weak vocab in that, if your ganna repeat it in ya chorus like that make it stand out wit sum flowin vocab. decent drop tho fo-real..... but enless u ganna go to a sad beat like that and wit a similar story, u should speed up your delivary so your accent isn't laughable- no hate, pretty decent.

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