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Old 08-16-04, 05:40 PM   #2
Ca'lam
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Voted For: DeadlyVision

yea.. this was easily DV..

Jonix: no emotion at all.. and you were flowing atttt to slow.. that was boring.. no offence,. easdily yopu could elevate.. just work on your flow andf rhyme scheme.. those are what i saw most flaws in.. and emotion..

DV: yonix lmao.. .. i felt you could use jsut a tad bit of emotion to, but other than that.. you strait.. if you spit more emotion and was into it more.. you'd be a good audio head..good job.. beat was tight as shit. i forget where i heard that beat tho.. oh well..


vote: DV
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