Light Weight
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This was feedback posted for Paramik
IP:
ok, paramik gets the vote..but i don't have enuff posts =/
first off.. natedogg didnt follow the rules, which should be d.q.
second, ummm..your rhyme scheme is horrible, and looks lame (no Offense)..Paramik had a decent punch not great, but good enuff to beat your best line outta that verse..
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