awesome peice.... i can relate fully... the flow was good, the vocab was aweome and the emtions were nice and strong..... fave lines:

within me the world is a perfect storm/

im the odd facing the norm/ this is the way of life, forget it,

ill die in the swarm/


the ending was perfect and made a full tru mark that will stay on ne one when they read this peice.... keep it flowin!