Voted For: intensify effect

phatinum
structure is decent.. u had one stretched line though.. flow fell off due to that stretched line.. ok multis.. no good wordplay.. none of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

intensity effect
structure is ok.. u have quite a bit of stretched lines though.. decent multis.. wordplay is alright.. a few of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
both had a decent structure.. both flows fell off.. both had decent multis.. neither had good personals.. intensity effect had the better wordplay, and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. intensity effect gets my vote..

VOTE - INTENSITY EFFECT

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