Voted For: e-dubz
hmm..
par:your first bar was very strethed in comparison to your second.. which totally kills your punch.. you had a chance if it flowed better...
edubz: you had name play, wordplay, and a little bit of a played punch, but it was deecent... enuff to bag a win..
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