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IP:
Voted For: Sick ILL Cell.
OMFG.. this was ridiculous, MR. ZACHY DOOM- where's ya structure, this wasn't even a battle verse.. there was no opener were u even doin' bars? anyways, break-down basically is, no structure, no real wordplay, vocab?- no, punches sum but not effective..
SIC- breakdown- wild structure but better than Zachy, wordplay nice, multis- aight.. nice verse u didn't even have to try: you dropped nice overall.. and the vocab- great use and tie-in with punches.. keep up ur work.. lol
VOTE: SIC , nice drop
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