10:23 till i'm 86
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Voted For: Demon Pyrokronix
..::ayo, complete honest vote, das all i do, so........heres how i saw it....... for typical
foam wit gross vomit,
fuck punches i hit like i chose to post comits/
^^^that one movie wit that white dude from malaboo rhymes these same things, not cool stay away from that.
.....u aint have any punches or personals, jus sayin what u can do and what u will do and what u can make him do... thats not a punch.
say some shit like....
fuck you demon, i wouldn't ever let u call yourself a phsyco
cuz its not crazy,but funny not spittin fire when your name is pyro
^^^personal, and leads into the punch....... battles u need stucture and punches... multi's are next to nothing.
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demon....
And nigga go against me, I'll fuckin rub you off the map,
The only thing that's "nasty" is your shitty attempts at rap
^^^u use "these" when theres wordplay, thats not wordplay
DP's from hell, here to incinerate and impail ya,
I guess it's "typical" for a Bronx bitch to be a failure
^^^this is and is a good personal/punch........ this is how its done and even though it aint to strong of a punch it basically by itself shows u know more of what your doin then typical and would of won u the battle by itself.
I'm destined to kill you, destined to burn and shine,
I mean I'm half spiting and I'm already on my 10th line.
^^^^^ always end wit a bomb ass punch, its your finisher for god sakes, never finish wit self glorification.
RETURN THE FAVOR.... LINKS ARE IN MY SIG
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