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Old 08-17-04, 11:29 AM   #14
Demon Pyrokronix
Flyweight
 
Posts: 130
From: England
This was feedback posted for BANG

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I been rippin open mics but im back with a vengance
Im hittin full contact so take bitch off the lesnse (Glasses)
Overseas tryin hard to rap like the best of U.S. (us)
keep if real playboy you not like the rest of U.S.
So dont come hard thinkin you really be testin U.S.
We been doing it far longer so dont think ahead of U.S.

Fuckin hell man that was wack as fuck! You ryhmed for lines with US, if I wasn't in Rabbits crew I'd vote for him just for that reason man.

Got a simple question to ask why you fuckin suck
is it you think you fast but you walk like a duck
Its just tha facts playboy you can smile you can cry
its that simple bitch you can ride you can die
Dont take me serious -this is a fuckin Game to you?
We'll see how serious when them missles aim and BANG at you

Whoa now I wouldn't wanna be a duck. lol. Weak as well man.

Rabbit I liked your verse, you had some good punches in there and a better flow. But more importantly you didn't ryhme 4 lines with the same word.
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