Voted For: !Mc Merc!
Structure - Merc, he had straighter lines, that were more parallel and looked more appealing..
Punches - Merc, he came out immediatley with punchlines and disses, though elusiv did not, plus mercs were a little more creative..
personals, both can elevate here, none really stuck out..
Flow, I guess that this is a tie, i didn't see anything wrong with your flows..
Vocab, both need to elevate. elusiv even made no sense in one part, when he said that he'll astronomically diss you, that doesn't make sense..
Overall, Merc, his verse made more sense and also had better punchlines and stucture which give an overall better verse..
ok, can you return the favor with a drop in my thread, thanx..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143024