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"till the day i die" from the heart.. please reply ta this and check back for changes
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07-01-02, 03:49 PM
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MilKMaN
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it was ok... word usage was simple..flow was ok stayed consistant... message was aiight... the feel of the verse felt more like poetry than a verse... nothing spectacular but it was a good read
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