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Old 08-17-04, 01:21 PM   #11
fluidmoon
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Voted For: The Black Plague

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plague:although your opener was mediocre, you still had a good verse here because of originality, i liked the "infallible" name diss, and thought your opener was funny, i liked the frat boy paddle lines and your closer, some funny shit here, good job....
infallible:your verse was decent, you had good flow and structure, i just here too many lines tho, about glocks and shells , boi, but i liked your verse too..........
Vote:balck plague due to originality and funny punches
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