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Old 08-17-04, 03:33 PM   #15
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Voted For: Da Prodigy


A jail love story and he’s keeping-my-Bars-Close....N u still couldn’t “Ride The Beat”…if u were Spittin-At-Car-Shows
6/10
Wants some “fresh meat”(beef)…so im shippin-up-cart-loads N like “retarded cashiers”….he’s proud of "RIPPIN"-BARCODES*..
Manipulation verse and my verse never endin-mixed-up … n U’d think I got em “choked in the country”…Cuz I got him on them-HIC-UPS
7/10
My words “scoop kids”….cuz im commin n “I-Spit-Cups”… n Ima call this kid a “penny”….the way He never GETTIN-PICCED-UP**
7/10
This battle is “waste of life”….like me “Blastin homos”…. N They way I pop ya LID(fitted) bacc….u’d think Im “Master of Soda”
Its like a dave nottie thread….endin with some funny photos…Flip the “d upside down” for trueth…to see you Master Yoga*
7/10
Heavy arsenals…got me Shipping tons of guns….N U Tryna grasp some skills….is like “gripping-Sons-Of-Nuns”**

I kill this kid quicker…than a kid with Summer Funds…. N u’d think im a “college professor”….cuz this is Ripping 1-0-1*
6/10
It’s a no brainer man….U can say ur Seein Feinds….
n Just call me “little Debbie”…cuz I got “40 ways To get U-CREAMED”
6/10
I take on individuals….n then-Maybe-teams….
N I sleep n nibble “maple leafs”….cuz I Eat-CANADIAN-DREAMS!**
6/10
This battle is a race…I have no need to talk shit….cuz when I “ran down my path”….i saw how this kidhad walked his...

Like a “car with no suspension”…again ya verse it got “me shock less”…Ima make ya career “end up as short”….as your DROP-DOWN-BOXES
.7/10


this guy mus be "high"...he been taking extasy pills...
if u woz wearing my pants..u still wudnt "pack frills"..(thrills)
6/10
taking his name off another prodigy on this site..
i guess wit brains like that...i can see why u bite..
6/10
you wudnt know "hype"...if you woz outta breath..*
this guy under "stress"...no wonder he bends for cats..**
5/10
couldnt "spill sickness"..masacaring with baseball bats
if i press this guys "switch"..he still wudnt see "light"..
u rhyme worse than stevie wonder..at fukin night!.
fuck it i "disspose" u freestyle...u rottin on a compost pile..
like a cracked "tile"...u faker than stories of "the nile"...
7/10

Came down 2 harder punches and overall better wordplay which went 2 Prodigy
manipulation u had good punches but there were all played and dull
u can elevate jus a lil bit ma
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