Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin

i'm taking this cat//
with serated blades, placed to his navel and back//
"Say my greatness is statement of fact."//
the tek'll have thoughts escapin ya mind//
battle, i'll treat you laced chemicals in coc, have you waitin in line//
thanks for the props and your vote//
but i'll still have you sweatin like frosty in a sauna while rockin a fur coat//
....yer verse is sounding played in a sentence//
cuz I'm too tight to fuck with,
...like anal penetration of infants//
I wrote an iller verse when i was slayin this lame//
but i treated it like monica's dress, and saved it for fame//
ya team need reality//
so wit ease i'll have Soulles sleepin with fishes,
.....like marine bestiality//
Practice from virginia snipings, gave me my aim//
but my spirit consumptional techniques, gave you ya name//

Punches=8
Meta's=7
Personals=6
Complexity=7
Open/Close=7

You ‘can’t fight‘… when ya ass has to ‘struggle for life,’
So Gothic.. I made u disappear when I ‘turned out the lights‘!!!!! *
I could rip you on personals… but Mak truthfully… nobody-cares..
Thinking of sendin u to hell… but ya sig, looks like ya already-there!!!!*
You say -stuff, your online so much… ya whole life is made-up,
U might win… cuz I don’t ‘punch’ grls.. Or guys who wear make-up!!!!!**
Gothic’s and rap don’t mix…. Com’on man lets just get-real…
Cuz ya getting no where quick, like ‘runnin for ya life’ on a treadmill!!!

Punches=6
Meta's=6
Personals=6
Complexity=7
Open/Close=6

Came down 2 better punches and overall better wordplay
this battle was ok but both could use a lil more harder punches

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