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Old 08-17-04, 05:35 PM   #35
~Luciano~
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~Oh my Gosh, i gotta battle a kid named Frost~
~Put Him Theough The Wash, Make Him Feel Lost~
~Note Ya, Cant Touch Mah Skill, im Compared To Hova~
~Dude Cant Ever Bring Flames Cause Hes Too Frozen Ova~
~This Is Devious Rap, So Like Mase Go to a Steeple or Mass~
~Read the Rules, But He Stll Recycles and Feeds More Than Homeless People in Trash~
~Destroy Ya Whole Crew, Make a Fast Bold Move~
~The Battle Wounds Are So Excrusiating, you Need Ya Mama To Hold You~
~You Never Exepted in The Game So You Stick~to~Scraps~
~Got So Many Loses Under His Belt, Hes Considered The LA Clippers-Of-Rap~

Punches=8
Meta's=7
Personals=7
Open/close=8
Wordplay=7
Deliquint new to the RB, the only way you're name will ever be mentioned,
Is when they show your pic, looks like your starving for attention,
You're the Jenny Craig of relaunched, Your name can't gain weight, you lose it,
Lookin' like a white Somalian, or a Cracker leadin' a back to Africa Movement.
You young and dumb, and should definately try to get up in summer school,
when you spelled Aka wrong, that means that mama definately raised a fool.
Wit intelligence like that, tha rap game will always gonna leave you broke,
Try to be a comedian, I know you at that age where you got good mama jokes.
It's like when you bust in a girl's face, you shoulda seen this comin',
Pic looks like you put on tanning lotion, but it couldn't save you from this sunning


Punches=6
Meta's=6
Personals=5
Open/close=5
wordplay=5
Came down 2 harder punches and better wordplay which alwayz wins a battle the personals were ok and opener and closers were not the best but they werent the worst eitheir.
Frost you can elevate and get harder punches fam

My vote~~~~Deliquint
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