View Single Post
Old 08-17-04, 09:36 PM   #19
fluidmoon
<<-Carpe Noctum->>
 
fluidmoon's Avatar
 
Posts: 2,183
From: NEW YORK
IP:

nevermind, my vote counts, you not in genius, in fact i got you mixed up with another gurl,ok:
manipulation: your verse had nice flow, and structure, i liked your punches they were strong, i liked your wordplay as well and the opening lines, you had some funny lines in there as well, so you got my vote for the overall stronger verse, goo djob
__________________
"QUOD ME NUTRIT, ME DESTRUIT--AUT VINCERE AUT MORI"

O Y D

*FluidMusic*


*Poetic Scriptures Moderator*