Voted For: Mad Dog

invader...no structur, completely ruined any flow,no punches of any note at all. i think u kinda wrote that like a piece ud spit on a mic, u new but that aint gona wrk in txt.
take a look at mad dogs piece....set ur verses like that,rhyme your words at the end of each line,n try cum up wit original complex wordplay n punches.
elevate...

mad dog...did enough to win.beta struc,flow.multies.metas...blah..everythin.
ur punches were ok...good wordplay
like the metas.
not ur hardest piece,but easy enough.....

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