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Old 08-18-04, 07:29 AM   #23
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Voted For: Demon Pyrokronix

Voted For: Demon Pyrokoonix

Structure - Demon, he had straighter lines, that were more parallel and looked more appealing..

Punches - Demon, he came out immediatley with punchlines and disses, though elusiv did not, plus mercs were a little more creative..

personals, both can elevate here, none really stuck out..

Flow, I guess that this is a tie, i didn't see anything wrong with your flows..

Vocab, both need to elevate. Myster even made no sense in one part, when he said that his rhymes covered in rust.yes they were!Demon: I liked he got Jackson in avatar

Overall, Demon, his verse made more sense and also had better punchlines and stucture which give an overall better verse..
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