Voted For: Mad Dog
aiight this was simple....
Mad dog got it in every department...
Flow- Mad
Punches- Mad
Structure- Mad
Multies- Mad
Vocab- Mad
ok, ZIM, basically you need to put your rhymes in a structure instead of just carrying them on and on without pressing enter. text is very different from live/audio battling and i recomment that you read the tutorials on this site before battling again.
vote- Mad Dog
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