|
New to RV
|
IP:
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by ...God...
this was a very good topic and i was feling this alot.. it had some nice wordplay.. okay emotions.. but the only think that mess'd up your peom alittle was the structure it was off .. and you really need to work on that.. so keep elevating and keep it up .. pretty good drop..
|
no doubt, good lookin out
~1
__________________
"Those who know don't talk,
and those who talk don't know a thing"
-Nas
"I swim but I wish I never learned, the water's too polluted with germs"
-Bradly Nowell
All my real niggaz stand Up.
|