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Old 08-18-04, 01:35 PM   #19
Ca'lam
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Voted For: Mad Dog

hmmm


magic: your story line was focused enuff.. your imegry was better, but the story line a creativity wasnt the best..flow was iiight.. vocab was iiight..

maddog:your storyline was quite good.. the flow was a lil choppy, but the story line and creativity made up for that.. to be maddog won this battle, due to his creativity..
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