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Voted For: THUGLIFEOUTLAW

both need to elevate fah real no real metahs or decent wordplay or multies attempted personals none really that hard hitting... try the tutorials guys they could help alot ....
no hate just call it like i see it but thug came more complex he at least tried tah get wordplay and multies though they were weak he tried tah build a verse with all the components
yung your verse was generic seems like you didn't try that hard to deliver good material but tried harder tah get mother fuckah in there as many times as you could....try tah lose the language and add content swearing doesn't neccesary make a verse bettah or make i rapper harder even though everyone swears once and a while try to use metaphors both of yah...
tutorials check them out....
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