Voted For: verbal power

verbal power:

"as quickly as i bring your detruction you'll think you shyne//
but in reality you'll be just a bitch burried alive//"

Cool

"you'll never come back like you got mistreated and abused//
you borrowed your wordz and now they've ben misused//"

not too good. weak punch.

''put in a place where your death is tha only thing expected//
your text will fall like i have antrhax and its ben injected//''

Had potential to be great. As is it's just good.

"(stlye change four closing lines)
i aleviate burends as if my name wus breast reduction//
im get these votes like they were influenced by seduction//"

sort of weak. too soft.

"your fucking stupid like looking for pencil instructions*//
your win collumn is limiteed like toaster functions//"

Probably would have sounded better if you flipped the two lines around, but still cool.



Invader:

"listen kid i dont got time for this shit you wanna live alright ill only kill ya a lil bit heres a seat now sit ima show ya how deep this battelin game gose how much yr mom is a hoe and how bad you sux wen it comes to flows ok so step down back the fuck up befor i kill u slut wut how well do u take a beetin cuz im the grim reeper and im reepin i did this while i was sleepin your a lil boy and im the deemin under your bed i haunt you u cant get me outta yr head ima drive ya till yr dead take my advice stop right now if you like ya life"

weakness at its highest. Learn to structure your rhymes. That made it harder to pick up on the flow of it. Plus you came too cliche. Work on it.