Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..


Ok this was a decent battle

Ingenoius........good imagery, and vocab was pretty good, flow was great and structure was on point throuhout..good storyline as well, I could picture your situation through your words...good drop

Empire.....your magery was poor you didn't let story develop you jumped right into the middle of the story instead of opening and then getting into the experiences of a convict which is what hurt you in this battle....your flow was a lil off as well as ya structure...gotta elevate

Vote: Ingenious

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