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IP:
Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..
ok to break it down.. there was times i was feeling minds verse.. he put more feeling into his work which is usually the best way to go about topicals. not to mention he had a pretty good structure and kept with it, a clean verse with no real problems.
Empire, ok, your ideas for this verse were pretty good but where u failed was in your rhyming and structure. there were a few bars that didnt connect and some lines were really small which doesent look good when working with text.
so my vote is going to mind... decent battle tho..
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