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Old 08-19-04, 05:55 AM   #15
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Voted For: ProVerse

You're Still a Boy, I'll Stab yo Voice Box, make u Kill The Noise
U're a dummy! This fools avatar says that his "CITY" is Illinoise
(that was very gay, no punch) 0/5

Wow, you're Steady Slippin while i'm ahead, Heavy Pimpin
I can tell that u're just a bitch, "Foolish" like Eddie Griffin
(not quite ripe 2/5


There's no way that you can win, You just don't Got The Soul
I'll burn you so bad that people will tell u to Stop, Drop, & Roll
ok3/5

You have no Power, I'll Devour You Each Round
And any other bullshit MC who needs 24 Hours to Freestyle!
(wtf, bad rshcme, no punch 0/5, u dissed youself

Yo whack ass never stood chance nigga, so just Let It Be
Only time i'll read somethin u wrote, is if it was a Check To Me
(crappy..............0/5


My skills pay the bills and will soon pay for a V12 Range
If u were ever ill then u sure "fell off track", like derailed Trains
(ok first line gay, second is like a 3

& when yo ass see me comin then you Best Find Protection
Coz like Ice Cube I Stay wit a Mac 10 & West Side Connection
GAY as fuck -100/5

you have good flow though and structure,...

the "fall" of rap, was spawned August the present year
blinded the peuples of the voters, with words, jerked tears
no punch )0/5, good bar tho

"winded" by "punches", punchlines not familiar with fisis
investors with you, stocks fail, so they closin the business
ORIGINAL 4.5/5

bruised mentally,mind on permenant writers block
infested with false confidense,so losses give you quite a shock

4.5/5 godd

the winner here........

imitates gamecube disc, "small" time rhymes easy to "lose"
figured you elevated, so you "fell" and "phyics" been proved
5/5 yo nice punch nigga

one win instantly boost you, like a slim fast blended shake
used too battlin herbs(codee) so battlin me have you phased
5/5 uhuhhhhhhhhh

ending for a "ghost"writer,still i "see through" your act
i notice a name change, loss of records so now u want it back
3/5 down a notch good punch, but dint go with the rest

i questioned the "theory of reletivity" of rap and you,lesson is
comparin you, with talent its ovious the test came negative
4/5
good finicher,
the winner is obvious.

proverse 4

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r.
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