Voted For: BANG
Rabbit - you had bad structure, ok disses, np punches really, no personals either, vocab was off, rhyme scheme was ok, but basic.. - 5/10
Bang, your rhymes were better, a few punches were in there, your stucture was better, no real personals though, but in all you get 7/10
so bang you get my vote, retutn the favor with a drop in my thread will you..
heres the link.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143508