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Sometimes you wish u were dead because of how yo life is/
But in the end you will maybe realize life is priceless
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That is a fuckin brilliant sentiment right there, in tha opening lines of this piece...
Just seemed so honest, true, realistic...brilliant...
After that however, i dont think it was as good...i mean, dont get me wrong, it was a nice drop, it had a strong message which people need to take heed of, ya know...
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The world is probably happy to rid of such a menace/
I was dropped like a bitch playin tennis
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I really wasnt feeling that line man, it just seemed so lame, and not as powerful as tha rest of your verse...i dont think u needed to put that in there to be honest!!
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I never lived life to its fullist never put enough time in
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^^ Anutha tremendous line...very well thought out and put...
All In All, i wasnt disappointed, i think with a lil' practice & elevation, you could be a talented artist...i'd like to hear this in audio really...
Keep on postin, and if ya got any audio's let me know so i can hear em...
Take care...
Peace n god bless.