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Old 08-19-04, 06:16 PM   #12
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Voted For: Mimesis

lyrical

I'll be your number one "Memisis" when i slam u with lines,
ur shit makes no sense that why u have 2 explain your rhymes:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139285
1st line eeh, 2ed line ok personal..

you wanna be "ILL"? i'll envade ur cells as if i was the "FLU"
pretty good record, but if i d/r'd as much as u, id win to,
first line preety good, 2ed aint connect... weak

your just a bitch, dont even claim that your the nicest vet,
afraid ima blemish ur record, thats why u havent accept'd the battle yet.
^^ um so what ya doing now??? weak....

nobody dies a virgin, thats the truth, cuz my rhymes r bout to fuck u,
cats all over ur challenge "if u lose, u leave",cuz we've seen enough of u,
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140442
personal ok but could of hit way harder...

only thing that is "hot" in ur life, is the "heat" of "Arizona"
u've been "burned" more times than the tire burns at "daytona
ending was ok..

noting stood out good in this verse a few ok lines u lacked hard punches ya flow was decent average creativeness
6.0

mimesis


Lyrical's constantly takin blows........ the way ima just rattle his flows
But at least lyrical's able to show good drive..
..to try and get this battle closed!*
ok start... could of word it better...

He saddles his hoes........ as i leave him caged to just contain his rage
I mean, even in the first sig that LF's reppin..
..Tupac is lookin off the page!
ha preety good personal made me laugh...

Ive shot the stage.. ima just rip this bitch.... and start to slowly stare
But hurry the fuck up and get the message..
..cause even in Poetry, 'Nobody Cares'!**
decent personal...

Im easily movin him, like rolling chairs.. and just brutally cut this clown
But at least LF shows 'Ill Intentionz'..
..when he tried out after it got shut down!***
ha another preety good personal

Whats around his shit?... Im the whole man, while hes screwed at half
But when the talk goes to the best here..
..all LF can do is laugh!****
decent ending...

had spme preety good personals decent diss flow good and creativeness was not bad...
8.0

vote.. mimesis just hit harder and had better personals...