Voted For: Sonofisis#1

String seemed to be too back and forth with the structure was what I first noticed. Where as Sonofisis was right with it in there, and I liked the added line in the middle as well. The flow wasnt too bad from either though. You could follow both if you wanted to. I thought that the punches were a lil harder on sonofisis' side, where as String started out well and was promising and then fell off. Much more wordplay from Sonofisis, that would be a place i would work on String if I were you. Just over a better verse from Sonofisis.