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Old 08-19-04, 08:50 PM   #6
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ok this was close. so im gonna have to break it down.

verbal abuse:
Sprinkling Hate n Herbs to Steak My Terms. It Would Bite To Have A Tie.
Its Bad To Lie. If You Ever Text A Veteran Verse, Be Sure To Prep Your Alliby.
a little long but i liked it.

jdot:
You'll die in yo sleep, cause of the words out of your mouth
'Verball'ly 'Abuse' pricks like you ass i council(cancel) em out
hot word play.

verbal abuse:
Check Their Forum For Bordem, Its Time To Put Ends To This Fam.
IDK How Their Shit Hits Fans? Your Beef Aint Even Beef...Its Spam.
again u should have flowed it better but it was funny, played but still funny.

jdot:
When you learn, you dont want it dawg, I'll chalk you up
Ill erase you, pat em together, have you coughing up dust
i didnt see that comin...thas a good thing.

verbal abuse
Just Block Out Things, n Fold Your Hand Before I Drop An Ace, And Have To Knock Out Kingz.
i play poker, so i was feelin that.

jdot:
so stop yo act, you'll never be hard with yo fist
I sonned you twice, tell yo crew to put me on they Respect List
wasnt a punch but i thought it was a good way to end it.

verbal abuse:
besides that i feel like u had some filler but it still didnt flow that well. ur lines were streched.

jdot:
u had filler to but at least it flowed. n there wasnt as much.

personels::jdot
meta::VA
flow::jdot
punches::jdot
content::tie
wordplay::jdot
verbal could've got this wit betta flow. so watch out jdot
dont slack.
JDOT GETS THA VOTE
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