dawg i gotta give u respect for commin on here speakin the truth bout that subject. Alotta catz on here or anywhere don't have the balls to speak about that in public, even thought deep down they know it's wrong. Yea we write pieces about violance and other bad shit like that but how many of us would really touch that subject? Anywayz as a flowing rap verse it wasn't the best i've seen but damn as a poem or message it was perfect, speakin the truth. You can't rate shit that comes from ur heart, bad or good it's still a good message and you should be proud you wrote that
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