Bangs like bikini attol
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This was feedback posted for Sonofisis#1
IP:
aiight fair vote man.. you both came pretty simple.. diss wise you were both about the same.. but flow and rhyming wise sono got this one...
he also held his structure better. spek, i can see you were trying to use multies there.. and the first line sort of worked ok, but on the punchline part of the bar, it sorted of ended too quick and didnt really work..
so basically im gonna give this vote to sono.
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