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Old 08-20-04, 03:43 PM   #12
aberrant
Flyweight
 
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From: Nottingham, England
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Voted For: Sonofisis#1

Sonofisis: Your verse was kina impressive. I liked the millionaire line a lot lol. I think your punches hit harder than Smashers and thats wat its all about. Also your flow was nice, i coul read thru it clearly and easily. Nice verse but maybe throw a few multi's in there to improve it

Smasher: Your verse wasnt half bad and it was a close battle but for me your verse came across basic. Extend yur vocab to improve and be a little more creative on your punches. Flow was on and off so that cud do with a little improvment. All in all tho a decent verse but didnt match Sonofisis in the punches department.

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