Banned: Cheating
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Voted For: BigChase
no hate on this battle, chase took it...both had nice flow but i was feelin chase's more
chase-started out coo, told us bout rape, then straight into it, fully explaining each little detail.(i like that)...kept doing his thang in the middle of the floor with nice wordplay and structure(more like a rhyming story) good shit...ended the rape into full detail again, and told us that he got caught, without making it predictable(and didnt come out and say "i was locked up for it)...good shit, enhance your vocab...OKAY ending(couldve been better)
fluidmoon-nice flow all around...started out slow, but picked it up near the middle to the end...didnt detail the rape too good, but still did yo thang. some lines had choppy rhyming, but it wasnt predictable, and it was creative...umm, you ending was better, OKAY detail thoughout the entire flow...
overall- both had nice flows(FLMOON): work on entrance next time, and fix up rhyming words(CHASE): work on making better rhyming words, they started to get boring near the end...yall did yall thang, had nice wordplay, and structure...keep doing this shit
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