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Old 08-20-04, 07:28 PM   #26
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Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..

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ingenious mind:you had nice flow and good imagery with your words, ya verse rhymed very well, and you took the topic with the intensity and feeling in ya words...
slx:you had a nice verse too, but i think hers was a lot more emotional and lyrically pleasent to read, no hate, because you told a nice story, i just like the way hers flowed and the descriptiveness
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