Voted For: intensify effect

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intensify effect:i liked the flow of ya verse, the continued rhyme scheme from the first lines of your verse to the second bar, nice punches and you never fell off, good job, ya closer was good too,
word: your flow was ok, but kinda fell of a bit towards the end, tho i liked your punches too, good job overall
vote:intensify for punches and flow

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