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Old 08-20-04, 07:40 PM   #11
fluidmoon
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Voted For: INFALLIBLE

although your structure was off a bit, i liked your verse because of the flow of it, i can tell because of how it would sound spitted, i liked your punches and your wordplay, this was a good drop man, i liked the closer as well,
i voted for you because of the personal style you put into this
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