yea, the flow on this is pretty nice. The punches were aiight. But if you freestyled it, I guess it's ok. But yea, your rhmyin' words are too basic, you kno what I mean? Like try makin' the rhymin' words more complex. like look for bigger words that mean the same thing and stuff like that. Also, a good place to find rhymin' words is www.rhymezone.com
Yea, but overall, it was a nice drop. 7/10 keep droppin', man