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IP:
Voted For: INFALLIBLE
well... i could tell a lie... or I could tell the truth...so since i ain't scared of getting on with either one of you or any one else for that matter... and since I ain't gotta lie to kick it omma start by saying both of these verses sucked ass... it's just that Fr3 sucked a lot more... In came kinda corny with lines like:
and the devils laughin,if there was such a thing
u couldn't weigh dudes problems out wit a human triple beam
u all fucked up, and u'll find ur moms up in da dump truck
I got gin in my cup, and ur bitch is sickin on my duck
and Fr3 came back with :
IP:
if u say u can beat me in the is battle u b a liar//
u got things mixed up like a weaf biter// (wife beater)
u need to retire/u cant win if u dont leap higher//
i'll chew u up like bubble gum/son/u in trouble punk//
when i think about u rappin i just chuckle chump//
and with the name infallible, u think u cant fail//
too bad u faced me first and i made u a tall tale//
ur rhymes r like a week old biscuit, they're stale//
give this game up, choose a different trail//
I mean really....his whole verse was worse than those four lines... In definitely had better structure and flow... shyt rhymed but the punces were weak and personals were non-existant... Fr3 needs to work on everything from beginning to end without skipping shyt in the middle... get a rhyme book or sum'n... you prolly the first person I'd ever tell to go bite sumbody's shyt...
no hate... just tough love!
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