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Old 08-20-04, 08:46 PM   #26
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Voted For: Typical

TOO EASY... dusty... ok verse but punches were weak... all of them! typical had way better wordplay but his lines coulda been written better to get a better effect.. hellboy line was trash.. good shyt with the fallujah current event... liked the last line but set up was blah... opener shoulda been worded better... Dusty.... what's "prudery?".... ya choice of words killed you... and ya structure was ugly...

got the point but didn't feel the effects...

no hate... just tough love!
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