Voted For: BigChase

I must say this was very good. Its a good topic to think about I have wrote a few poems and short stories on the subject myself. Big props to both writers for sharing their thoughts on this topic first off. I think both were very well on point with the way it flowed and how well the structure was. You both made it very easy for the reader to consume. At first glance I must say I give an edge to bigchase because he comes with the story, then 8 months later as well. You know at the end of every story everyone wants to know what happens later, or how things come out, so thats a plus. Over all both were very nice, I just thought that gave bigchase a small edge.

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