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Old 08-21-04, 12:09 AM   #10
TAKENOTICE
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Voted For: Empire

EMpire i was feelin the verse short and sweetpunches and wordplay were on point simple structure good for only 6 lines...
6th your lines came out streched and your verse seemed simple and generic ...try tah not force the rime ...
both stay up stay active VOTE OFTEN....
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