Both good battles,but without a doubt Direkt took this,he was more DIREKT with his punches and had way less fillers.Followed with better flow and multis....For example
Quote:
Direkt
On the real...Vast Knowledge got to be insane if he want sto "Battle me"...
Im the type to cut legs off and make emcee's jump off "Balconies"...
If your the kind to talk about "Hoes", well my "Knife's on ya Dime"...
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Notice how the flow is good,some multis and not a lot of fillers....
Now take a look at Vasts opener
Quote:
Vasts
yo' fuck wit ~VaSt~KnOwLeDgE~dog he got the hughest tools/
that'll make the hughest dudes cop a bitch attitude//
and speakin of you- i don't mean to be rude/
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too many fillers,no real hard punches in their...
Now here is Direkts next few bars
Quote:
Direkts
Must be calling "Peramedics" the way you got your "Life on the line"...
My verse is in, his comment is "Damn... He's Raw"...
Your style is 'bout to break like Obese cats on "See-Saw's....
Vast's Verse is "Blah, Blah, Blah" to me...STOP! "Your not Real"...
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Look at his first line,awesome wordplay right their,and the second line is hot......plus he has a lot of multies..
see how raw rhymes with saw and obse with see,and that works with real,and blah with saw and so on....good muties.. and hard punches,the third line in their is the best punch out of the battle in my opinon...
now lets take a look at Vasts
Quote:
Vasts
but, i'll twist ya' face just like a "Rubics Cube"//
ayo' my aptitude is known to bend spoons/
I'll point sharp objects at ya' body and walk through the "exit wounds"//
~KnOwLeDgE~ bold enuf to walk in ya room/
and destroy the foundation of ya house usin' a "Sonic Boom"//
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the first punch was good,next one is a pretty good filler,third punch was real good,next was a filler leading up to another filler/punch.....
those were good,just too many fillers,the flow was nice,but it wasn't like Direkts,he had the multies to ease the reader from line to line to give a better flow
Now to skip past the rest and look at the closing lines
Quote:
Direkts
Your no competition on the mic in text like Nelly in audio against "KRS One"...
Build collisuem's... breaking my walls, i'll beat you with a "Brick Badly"...
I hate cat's like Vast Knowledge cause they're a former "Trick Daddy"...
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The first line was a decent punch,the follow up wasn't to strong,and the finisher was a pretty good closing......
It didn't have the multies like the other lines,but was a pretty good closing
Quote:
Vastsstarin' in my eyes is like lookin at death/
cuz just for fun i'll staple ya' hands to ears and beat your ass cus you act deaf//
continuiosly speakin'~leavin' ya body covered wit' steel/
until you squeal` like you just recieved an anal "Papsmire"
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first line another filler,but good.second was an ok punch,and the last two pucnhes were ok,but I wasn't feeling them too much....
So therefore My vote is for Direkt Threat who I found had better flow,more multies,less fillers,harder punches,and better metaphors
vote=Direkt Threat
This was a good battle but Direkt came out better