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Old 08-21-04, 06:06 AM   #10
Premanition
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[QUOTE=Shabba Ranks]decisive victories but not tight?...either u 'sucked dick' or were just polite...
future days spent upright...get off ya knees bitch, this site knows u 'bite'...
6/10...personal, but no punch
not in depth wen I talk about ur past...it contradicts my name, so im vast...
'superior' just a new mask...still a bitch tricking newbies for an easy task..(link 1)
6/10...ok.....
its a fuckin shame...u got me hoping for no verse but a post thats plain...
jus so i don't have to compare mine previous to ensure its not the same...
5/10...wtf are you talkin about son...

^^^he bites...fuck me ur in the final n u don't get that? shit!!!!!!

put ur verses through an examination…u fail due to lack of dedication…
not satisfied with just one mention……………………………………⠀¦
………….in ‘The Wall Of Shame’ u want a standing ovation…………..(link 2)
5/10...this coulda been hot, but u worded it bad...
u being a moderator on this site…is the proudest moment of ya life……
not happy, contemplatin suicide…like me u waitin on a ‘steak knife’…(mag late)
7/10...liked this one...
punchline league….banned for 2 weeks in a row but still got picked to go…
coincidently drawn with ‘superior’...or was it cos he knew I wudnt show..(
6/10...your kinda dissin yourself, showin ppl that your a regular no shower..
overall - 5.83...wasnt really feelin your verse...your structure is stretced lookin too...



o.k wot eva uppin
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