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Old 08-21-04, 12:17 PM   #11
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STiLL Da FUKKiN SiCKEST!!
 
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From: NyC,Da HOMe OF Da TWiN TOWER'S!
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Voted For: -..Jono..-

wow dis shit was wun sided as fukk 4real....phantom ya first line was worst da shit aint flow or nothin lmaoooo let me break my vote down tho

opener-jo...phan shit was wack!
structure-jo shit was real neat..phan ya lines was ond a other side of da page
punchlines-jo...hands down phan had a couple but htey wasn't fukkin w/ his
multis-nun
personals-jo da 9th line
creativity-umm a tie
finisher-jo
enjoyed-jo ofcourse...phan first off ya ryhme scheme is like a lil kidds step dat up u cant flow cuzz da shit u be sayin is retarded n datz basically it..n who u battled da 9 wins?? lmaoo...jo just ya ryhme scheme alone was beta than his whole verse just step ya punchlines n up n u'll be good..
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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT